Vagueness, Ambiguity, and Clarity in Writing

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Vagueness, Ambiguity, and Clarity in Writing
CRT/205: Critical Thinking
December 7, 2012
Gecobie Davis

When I looked further into Capital punishment laws I found a very interested story about when it first started.
The first established death penalty laws date as far back as the Eighteenth Century B.C. in the Code of King Hammurabi of Babylon, which codified the death penalty for 25 different crimes. The death penalty was also part of the Fourteenth Century B.C.'s Hittite Code; in the Seventh Century B.C.'s Draconian Code of Athens, which made death the only punishment for all crimes, and in the Fifth Century B.C.'s Roman Law of the Twelve Tablets. Death sentences were carried out by such means as crucifixion, drowning, beating to death, burning alive, and impalement. I think the United States should ban using capital punishment because many of them don’t do serious crimes then others. Look at the case of Brian Dugan is one of the people that the United States reconsider to use the capital punishment. I think if a person breaks the law any type of form of fashion they are responsible for their own actions. Brain Dugan execution took more than twice as normal time to do and appeared to some families member that was in a suffering process at the time of crime happen(Chicago tribune, 2011). I feel like the government is doing what they can to put these criminals in jail for killing, murdering, raping, and kidnapping another human being. I think by giving them life in prison should be considered as capital punishment. They will not see no more daily life outside those walls.
The Department of Justice should gather all the facts before they put the wrong person in jail. Rolando Cruz is an example of the United States in the case of Brain Dugan because they falsely accused this man for the crime Brain Dugan did. That’s why the United States should…...

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